- Cake Clash, BL Maxwell and Claire Castle
- Trusting Jack: MC Securities Book 1, Ruby Moone
- Cowboy Rules: Breaking the Rules Book 4, Jacki James
![Cake Clash by [Maxwell, BL, Castle, Claire]](https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/41MnvzGib4L._SY346_.jpg)
The premise of this story was so cute, I could hardly wait to dive in. The final product, though, left a bit to be desired. There was an immense amount of telling instead of showing, so much minutiae that I skipped pages of text and missed virtually nothing. The relationship progressed very quickly after they were "reunited" and while I wouldn't have a problem with pretty much zero angst, it seemed too simplistic, as did the writing which was basic and lacked depth and punch. Once they decided that there was nothing that would keep them apart, not even their roles in the competition, they wasted no time being together in every way possible. The many, many mentions of their dwindling time together on the show and how they felt about that came off as the authors trying way too hard to make the future seem shaky and their present bittersweet. Their deep moments felt a little juvenile, a little forced, and a lot too cheesy. Overall, though, it was a sweet story with lots of passion and no real angst except the contrived descriptions of an unsure future following the show. 3 stars.
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![Trusting Jack (MC Securities Book 1) by [Moone, Ruby]](https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/51-J6CdFxAL.jpg)
There were a bunch of times I wasn't sure where their heads were, like why Michael, the naturally suspicious, very intelligent, successful tech and securities guy, would push to get a huge wad of cash to a severely shady character when he knew he could watch out for Jack well enough that they could have at least waited until the situation was more in their favor. And I didn't mind the quickness of their relationship progression because we were so much in their heads, especially Michael's, so it didn't feel as fast as the timeline indicates. Overall I found the story to be pretty sweet despite its issues. 3.5 stars.
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![Cowboy Rules (A Breaking the Rules Novel Book 4) by [James, Jacki]](https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/416GFE7kSgL.jpg)
Having gotten to know these men in the periphery of the other Rules books this story didn't feel like insta-love or insta-lust at all. If read on its own, it might be seen that way, but the depth has been building for quite some time now and I couldn't be more pleased how these men finally get onto the same romantic page together. They were hella steamy, so sweet I needed to brush my teeth, and they communicated. Wait, they used their words? Why, yes, yes they did. Lots of points right there that they didn't shy away from expressing what they needed, wanted, feared, and hoped. And when their hearts reached out to Spencer who needed them? It's like they were already so united that they couldn't help but work toward the same goal. I really loved how this story came together for these two men and that neither of them were ashamed of their "dating" history but knew that from then on it would be just the two of them. Their expectations and fears were realistic and addressed appropriately. I'm totally sold on Matt and Lincoln. 4 stars.
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